Win-Back Email Template — Lapsed Subscriber
An elegant, dark-editorial win-back for lapsed premium subscribers, with a custom wave-divider SVG hero and a limited-time comeback rate.
The prompt
Two ways to build this email in plain language. The fastest is Temway's in-editor assistant — open the chat drawer in the email editor and paste the recipe below. Or connect Claude or ChatGPT via Temway's MCP and paste it there; the agent builds the email step by step. Either way, adapt the copy and colors to your brand.
- An email is a top-to-bottom stack of blocks — the recipe follows that order.
- A
[layout]step becomes a single image (great for heroes); everything else stays live text and links. - Theme the footer to match — the recipe's last step does exactly that.
Want this exact email? Click Use this template below to clone
it into your workspace, then ask the in-editor assistant to rebrand it. Over MCP, tell
your agent to clone the Temway share txTi6AB4N01QFlQSuZeNO and rebrand. For the
full model, point an MCP agent at get_concept — email-structure,
layouts-vs-emails, design-recipes.
A literary win-back letter for lapsed premium subscribers — the kind of email a small editorial publication sends to a reader it genuinely misses. A dark, custom wave-divider hero sets a serious, magazine-like tone, then a short letter from the editor names a recent piece they’d love, with a quiet comeback rate and a soft opt-down.
Snapshot
- Goal: win back a lapsed premium subscriber with editorial warmth and a quiet comeback rate.
- Audience & tone: former paying subscribers who let their membership lapse. Literary, elegant, never salesy — written like a real letter.
- Palette: page
#1c1917(dark) · container#292524· text#fafaf9/#a8a29e(muted) · accent red#be162c - Font:
Georgia, "Times New Roman", serif - Artwork: custom SVG wave-divider hero — a deep black band with a thin red wave dividing the headline from the masthead. Built via
add_custom_shapewith raw SVG path data.
Build recipe
Each step is one block in the flat stack, top to bottom.
[native]= a real email block.[layout]= a free-form layout embedded as a single image.
- [layout] Wave-divider hero — build a free-form layout: dark background
#1c1917, custom SVG wave-divider (a thin#be162cwave path, 600×24, centered vertically as an editorial ornament), eyebrow “LOOM & PRESS”, heading “We noticed your absence”, subline “And there’s a piece this week we think you’d hate to miss.” Text-only artwork — the working CTA is step 6. - [native] Heading — text. “A short letter”.
fontSize: 22,fontWeight: 700, color#fafaf9, center, generous top padding. - [native] Letter body — text. “Dear reader, your membership lapsed last month, and the newsroom felt it — every reader who leaves takes a piece of independent journalism with them. We’ve been writing for you anyway. If you’ll have us back, we’d like to make it easy.”
fontSize: 16, color#a8a29e, left,lineHeight: 1.8, italic. - [native] Pull-quote — text. “The most quietly subversive reporting we’ve published all year.”
fontSize: 18,fontWeight: 700, color#fafaf9, center, italic, generous vertical padding. Visual contrast alone sets the pull-quote apart — no divider chrome needed. - [native] Code display — text. “COMEBACK50”.
fontSize: 28,fontWeight: 800, color#be162c, center, 4px letter-spacing, generous padding. Half off the next three months — oversized + copyable. - [native] CTA — button. Label “Renew at the comeback rate”, red
#be162cfill, white text, rounded, center. - [native] Body — text. “50% off your next three months. Then the standard rate — cancel anytime.”
fontSize: 14, color#a8a29e, center. - [native] Preference line — text. “Rather step back? You can pause your membership or say goodbye — we’ll respect either.”
fontSize: 13, color#a8a29e, center, links in red#be162c. - [native] Footer — text. “Loom & Press · 92 Whitfield Lane, Brooklyn NY 11211 · [Twitter] [RSS] [Letters]”.
fontSize: 12, color#a8a29e, center, link color red#be162c. Custom text footer for the fictional brand.
Make it yours
- Swap the comeback rate (50% / three months) for your actual win-back offer.
- Replace the pull-quote with a line from your most recent can’t-miss piece — a real headline or excerpt beats any copywriter.
- Recolor the red accent — but keep the dark editorial palette if you want the literary tone to land.