Win-Back Email Template — Lapsed Subscriber

An elegant, dark-editorial win-back for lapsed premium subscribers, with a custom wave-divider SVG hero and a limited-time comeback rate.

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The prompt

Two ways to build this email in plain language. The fastest is Temway's in-editor assistant — open the chat drawer in the email editor and paste the recipe below. Or connect Claude or ChatGPT via Temway's MCP and paste it there; the agent builds the email step by step. Either way, adapt the copy and colors to your brand.

  • An email is a top-to-bottom stack of blocks — the recipe follows that order.
  • A [layout] step becomes a single image (great for heroes); everything else stays live text and links.
  • Theme the footer to match — the recipe's last step does exactly that.

Want this exact email? Click Use this template below to clone it into your workspace, then ask the in-editor assistant to rebrand it. Over MCP, tell your agent to clone the Temway share txTi6AB4N01QFlQSuZeNO and rebrand. For the full model, point an MCP agent at get_conceptemail-structure, layouts-vs-emails, design-recipes.

A literary win-back letter for lapsed premium subscribers — the kind of email a small editorial publication sends to a reader it genuinely misses. A dark, custom wave-divider hero sets a serious, magazine-like tone, then a short letter from the editor names a recent piece they’d love, with a quiet comeback rate and a soft opt-down.

Snapshot

  • Goal: win back a lapsed premium subscriber with editorial warmth and a quiet comeback rate.
  • Audience & tone: former paying subscribers who let their membership lapse. Literary, elegant, never salesy — written like a real letter.
  • Palette: page #1c1917 (dark) · container #292524 · text #fafaf9 / #a8a29e (muted) · accent red #be162c
  • Font: Georgia, "Times New Roman", serif
  • Artwork: custom SVG wave-divider hero — a deep black band with a thin red wave dividing the headline from the masthead. Built via add_custom_shape with raw SVG path data.

Build recipe

Each step is one block in the flat stack, top to bottom. [native] = a real email block. [layout] = a free-form layout embedded as a single image.

  1. [layout] Wave-divider hero — build a free-form layout: dark background #1c1917, custom SVG wave-divider (a thin #be162c wave path, 600×24, centered vertically as an editorial ornament), eyebrow “LOOM & PRESS”, heading “We noticed your absence”, subline “And there’s a piece this week we think you’d hate to miss.” Text-only artwork — the working CTA is step 6.
  2. [native] Heading — text. “A short letter”. fontSize: 22, fontWeight: 700, color #fafaf9, center, generous top padding.
  3. [native] Letter body — text. “Dear reader, your membership lapsed last month, and the newsroom felt it — every reader who leaves takes a piece of independent journalism with them. We’ve been writing for you anyway. If you’ll have us back, we’d like to make it easy.” fontSize: 16, color #a8a29e, left, lineHeight: 1.8, italic.
  4. [native] Pull-quote — text. “The most quietly subversive reporting we’ve published all year.” fontSize: 18, fontWeight: 700, color #fafaf9, center, italic, generous vertical padding. Visual contrast alone sets the pull-quote apart — no divider chrome needed.
  5. [native] Code display — text. “COMEBACK50”. fontSize: 28, fontWeight: 800, color #be162c, center, 4px letter-spacing, generous padding. Half off the next three months — oversized + copyable.
  6. [native] CTA — button. Label “Renew at the comeback rate”, red #be162c fill, white text, rounded, center.
  7. [native] Body — text. “50% off your next three months. Then the standard rate — cancel anytime.” fontSize: 14, color #a8a29e, center.
  8. [native] Preference line — text. “Rather step back? You can pause your membership or say goodbye — we’ll respect either.” fontSize: 13, color #a8a29e, center, links in red #be162c.
  9. [native] Footer — text. “Loom & Press · 92 Whitfield Lane, Brooklyn NY 11211 · [Twitter] [RSS] [Letters]”. fontSize: 12, color #a8a29e, center, link color red #be162c. Custom text footer for the fictional brand.

Make it yours

  1. Swap the comeback rate (50% / three months) for your actual win-back offer.
  2. Replace the pull-quote with a line from your most recent can’t-miss piece — a real headline or excerpt beats any copywriter.
  3. Recolor the red accent — but keep the dark editorial palette if you want the literary tone to land.
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